firecrackerboom088's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[When Mario met Miyamoto]

Brilliant!

Hahaha, i always wondered how he got the idea for that!

jackbliss responds:

Heh heh... well now you know ;-)

[mace vs katana]

Not bad

I like your drawing style, however, you should be less messy when you change frames. You must not know about layers yet. Learn about layers and tweens. Also, take a look at when the man on the right is swinging his katana over his head, you can obviously tell that you just erased from his wrists up.

Pretty good for your first flash though! Keep at it.

Souldragoon0893 responds:

I know all i could know about tweens and layers, i was too lazy to use them though, in the manner i did this i coul do a frame quickly by pressing f6, pressing "E" for the eraser, erase what needs to be changed, then press "B" for the brush, paint it in another position, press f6 over and over.
instead of having to change frames, block a frame, unblock the other etc.
this is how i had this animation done in 10 minutes!
but i recognize i just erased from the wrists and up on the katana guy :)
thanks for thwe comment! :D

[Geetar Licks]

lucky this was cool riffs

i would have blammed this if you didnt have some good licks in there. try making it more Eye popping!

Into-The-Storm responds:

Yea im always working on my skill at guitar. But at flash.. not so much lol

[NIN~ E.D.I.E.T.S]

Pretty darn good!

I like your style of animation. It was very clear what the character was feeling. The story went well with the song, which I bet is why you made this flash in the first place.

Some things you could work on are your syncing of the voices to the character's mouth, and not having so much repetition. Other than that, GREAT FLASH!

ViNCeNT-aSMoDeuS responds:

It is fixed. =3
Well, apart from the repetition.
Thanks for the support anyways! ^-^

[Halloween Randomness]

Very well done.

I liked your drawing style very much, and especially the way you lip-synched to the vocals. Great work, keep it up!

Outrage92 responds:

Thanks. Glad you liked it.

[His & Hers: Christmas]

very well done

i love your work. this one was great. Lol on your girl voice acting. :P i think you should keep doing this, definitely. keep animating.

Haleth responds:

I might just have too... but im moving in a week and I'm not sure if i'll have enough time to after that....

[Officer: November 1945]

very well done

it was not perfect. but, it showed the story very well. the music went very well with it. i understood exactly what was going on without any dialogue or anything. keep up the GREAT work, I hope to see more productions like this in the future. :)

white-shark responds:

thx..i tried to do my best to fit the music with the movie ;-)

[Christmas Story]

hey not bad

i remember watching/reviewing your pokeymon movie, i remembered seeing that. The only thing you really need a lot of improvement on is doing the lip synchng. if you get that down better, people wont notice it, and they will enjoy it more. great job on this one. glad you dont throw stuff together in 5 minutes like some others.

Pezboy440 responds:

Hi glad ya sew my 1st movie. And i'll work on the lipsinking more. Thanks for your time revueing!

[Sweet Revenge!]

pretty dang good

for a stick movie this kicks ass besides being short. I loved your effects of coming through the door and doing the dual wield pistol. Good effects of blood and bullet holes as well. All you gotta do is make these longer and have a purpose. Something like this, except maybe 2-3 minutes long WILL make front page.

Darrek

H-W-T responds:

Thanks alot :)
And I knew people wouldn't like it with no story but like i said it's my first one and i'm just seeing if i can animate before i do meaningful ones.

Thanks for the review!

[Bah Humbug!]

not too bad

i liked the idea. A couple points though, you spelled christmas wrong the first time, and it lasted too long, i thought it was the end of the animation. Good work though, even though i dont like those kinda clay lookalike flash people.

DrunkFunk responds:

Thanks for pointing the spelling mistake out. Like I said it's my first completed animation so I wanted to use some simple characters. Thanks anyway!